#2
its pretty good. i didnt like the guitar sound at first, but you made it work, and i like the harmony in the chorus. good job

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ha whichever one plays first.
#3
mic sensitivity was to high lol.
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#5
...lyrics... not quite on.

And try to breathe more in your singing... without breaking the verse lines into different syllables.

The guitar could be smoother. but it isn't bad. good job.
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#6
dammit , i was hoping nobody would know the song well enough to noticethat i screwed up
You are not your job.
You're not how much money you have in the bank.
You're not the car you drive.
You're not the contents of your wallet.
You're not your fucking khakis.
You're the all-singing, all-dancing crap of the world.
#7
did you mix lyrics in after playing the riff or did you play and sing that. Singing wasnt bad, suprised me a little it was better then i expected after hearing the guitar. What i cant tell is if your trying to alter the song intentionaly or if your not able to hear/duplicate how the riff actualy goes. So if you are trying to change it you need to make it stand out more in a unique way.

not bad work but im not a huge fan of the electric guitar and that song. 6/10
#8
I'm not a big fan...

Guitar was sloppy and singing/lyrics were way off. The harmony was nice though, creative I did enjoy listening to it. I covered this song a while back. I think it's still in my profile some where... I used an electric guitar too and I think it turned out okay.
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#9
i just strummed the chords to see how it sounded , type thing, and i had a direct input frrom my guitar to the recorder, so thhats why the tone sucks lol
You are not your job.
You're not how much money you have in the bank.
You're not the car you drive.
You're not the contents of your wallet.
You're not your fucking khakis.
You're the all-singing, all-dancing crap of the world.