When I'm without you,
I'm locked behind bars,
and its just me and this old guitar

{So I'm telling you,
shoot for the stars
and even if you miss
I'll still be yours}

Lost without you,
leaving the walls
of the prision behind


I'm wondering
what went on
so im sittin here
singin this song


yeah any advice would be really helpful...thanks
Quote by NICKOLASrox

that's what I was thinking
sorry, but "shoot for the stars" is probably one of the most cliched phrases ever

plus don't use all exact rhyme