#1
I just made one... I barely write at all... Don't critize every little thing since it's been a while I wrote anyhting.

This was inspired by my friend, who has this occurring nightmare, of being in a dark hallway, and it's pitch black. Everyso often, there's lights, and theres a voice. He can't understand the voice, and if it's a girl or a guy. Then, it goes back to darkness, and the voice goes away. He then reaches the end of the hall, and then wakes up terrified.


Walking down
a narrow path
completely blind-

retchid fear
know I'm here--
I cannot look behind

going down this narrow path
knowing not of what is ahead nor behind,
Rather here, I don't know,
What is left to say.
This is a dark,
Darker than the darkest black:
no illumance,
encumbers my soul


It is clear, a light ahead
Hope is coming

As I come, to this light
I notice now

A peculiar voice, I have not heard,
speaks to me,

I cannot hear,
what he-or-she says,
But it's clear,
All hope is dismay;

This voice soons fades away,
and back to darkness I go,
continuing my journey,
off to the unknown.

As I pass
this plentiful space,
my mind keeps racing,
what could it be?
What is the voice?

Time has passed
since the last surpass
I have came,
to the light

My mind has become numb,
Strucken With Fear,
what happened this painful night

My eyes are sore
for what ahead
appears to be a door

I wish to run
to open it, to leave
but I remain my steady pace

As I near
my heart races,
I breathe faster,
I scream,
All hell breaks loose,

but all it was...
was a dream
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#4
Wrong Thread!!!!!
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#5
sounds pretty cool, but i have a question. Why have i never seen someone post lyrics on this website that are positive? It's always vague and depressing.
#7
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sounds pretty cool, but i have a question. Why have i never seen someone post lyrics on this website that are positive? It's always vague and depressing.

It's supposed to be eerie/sadish sounding. I don't always write like this

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Amateur Speller I'd say.


I did it in notepad, since I'm on my dad's laptop, and not my PC where I have access to spell check... and I did it quick...
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