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I wrote this in about 5 minutes, I'll crit for crit if you leave a link. Shatter the Flame -

This is my eternal song
We journey through the forest long
Is this my queue to enter?
I'll wake in tommorows hour

Feel the nightshade, blood and faith
The darkness hounds our dreams
Cant fault this sinsiter design
Cant fault the passing of time

Cherish forever the longest light
Cherish forever the thickest night
Theres noone to blame
So just shatter the flame

I watch through my dreamless eyes
Solar lights strobe the skies
wish i could merge the black and the white
With i could merge the day and the night

Cherish forever the longest light
Cherish forever the thickest night
Theres noone to blame
So just shatter the flame
... shatter the flame
Raise your chalice my brother
Raise it high
To catch the fire that falls from the sky
Last edited by Bal_Sagoth at Mar 2, 2008,