#1
I have sufferd defeat
Way too many times
To be encounterd with this labe
You have put on me
But i will not fail
I will not fail
I will escape this curse
You have bestoed upon me

I will not face defeat
I will not face defeat
I will escape this curse you have bestoed upon me
I will not face defeat

I have fallen, I have failed
I have choked, I will prevail
And one day you will see
I no longer have these blind eyes inside of me
How can you say those things you said?
I am only a man
And now i have an allas rated sould
Cut is too deep
It will no longer be whole
Since you know That this fire burns inside of me
I will secape
This curse you have bestoed upon me

I will not face defeat
I will not face defeat
I will escape this curse you have bestoed upon me
I will not face defeat

Stop!
Your pushing me to the edge
But I shall be rid of this pain
Im losing my mind
Im running out of control
I no longer have flesh wounds
The are carved into the bone
I will not relax
I will just scream
Until the pain goes away
For I have escaped
The curse you had bestoed upon me

Oh! how this infuriates me
For what you have done to me
But it is all over now
For you will feel my curse
And my pain I have felt for so long
So good riddance
Because its all over for me!

please tell me what you think of it
#3
i think its retarded no offense lol

what did u get make that poem off of the Guitar Hero song MyCurse!!!!

ahah
#5
Quote by Dethtallica
i think its retarded no offense lol

what did u get make that poem off of the Guitar Hero song MyCurse!!!!

ahah


dude i wrote this song before that song was even thought about!
#6
Dude, dont listen to these guys in my opinoin that was pretty f***in good!

One thing, though. It WAS rather lengthy, try cutting it down a little bit.
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#8
i think its retarded no offense lol

what did u get make that poem off of the Guitar Hero song MyCurse!!!!

ahah


Hmm.... The irony, lol.