#1
I am in newspaper at my school and i was asked too write a poem. Here it goes.

La Mer
She is beautiful in the morning
To have La mer's subtle smell
flowing and wrapping it's power and warmth

La mer is the gamble to find our brothers;
who remain able, agile, and honest of no sin

Provatice and Feminine, she nourishes millions of us
Occupying the thoughts of men and kin the like
We chase her children with no end in sight,


It is due tomorrow and its supposed to remain short. Any help or constructive criticism would be glady appreciated.
Thanks
#2
And La mer means The ocean or sea in spanish. I forgot too include that sorry