#1
well this is my first time writing a song. I've been a long time reader here, but this is my first time actually posting.

Well i've got too much self esteem
to write you a good love song
so, heres a half-assed attempt
to get you to notice me

Im just a middle class kid
who doesnt have any problems
but i have a few issues
and i think me and you can fix this
you might just get sumthin out of it too

I've never had my heart broken
but then again ive never tried x2

I've spent enough time on this earth
to know when its my time to leave
but im ready just yet
im wating for you.

not much of a song yet. still have to bust out the thesaurus and get some rhymes in there. This song is played as a folk-punk kinda thing. With G-A-C power chords. Thanks, ANDREW
#2
Well i've got too much self esteem
to write you a good love song
so, heres a half-assed attempt
to get you to notice me


lol are you sure? I hope you finish... whatever your writing here.
#3
If you could give the rules the once over then you can repost this.

Thanks
THW
Filth, pure filth... That's what you are.