#1
Licking off the shot of flame
From the hole in my skull
Where there's no more name
I can't help since that call

Every sunset since
Has seemed to drop
Blue light on this fence
I've been clawing up

Ever worded into a spiral
Circle and cycle cross
At the bottom a safe pyro
There with words I’m at a loss


I felt like writing some pretty simple poetry/lyrics so I thought how better to do so than on UG. Gonna add to it, just want some critique on the first bit, cheers.
Last edited by PitLurker at Mar 3, 2008,
#3
Oddly enough I've never thought of that but it makes far too much sense to ignore. Thanks!