#1
The title is just a fancy way of saying "meh." Lets see if you can figure out the rest of this from that. I want to see if this makes much sense to normal people.

It will take a little thinking, maybe, to get the relation between the 3rd and 4th paragraph. Give it a go.
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Indifference remains

It doesn't take much to realize
We are oblivious to oblivion

Marching is herd, towers fall
We shrug our shoulders and turn our heads

Is this how we prefer it, ignorant and blind?
We cover our ears, eyes and mouths

These monkeys were not evil,
they were pacifists
But what use is a pacifist
if he is maimed?

So hear this, monkeys;
If we are aware of hell,
we can keep it from springing fourth
If we close ourselves from it
It will only grow stronger

The weakest man is a turned one
with his back to the sword
If you do not know this
you are learning

Oh, never mind me
just turn away
dismiss me like you do to
all your predators

c4c
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You're just another brick in the wall
#3
Quote by WeepingGuitar
hey pink floyds great, i tried to write like roger/gilmour, let me know what you think,

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=804005


Only if you crit me first, sorry. That post was kinda irrelevant. Things would be different if you PMed me 'bout it.
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You're just another brick in the wall
#4
Quote by En_zed
The title is just a fancy way of saying "meh." Lets see if you can figure out the rest of this from that. I want to see if this makes much sense to normal people.

It will take a little thinking, maybe, to get the relation between the 3rd and 4th paragraph. Give it a go.
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Indifference remains

It doesn't take much to realize
We are oblivious to oblivion

Great start, nice and simple.

Marching is herd, towers fall
We shrug our shoulders and turn our heads

"Marching is heard..." Don't quite get this stanza.

Is this how we prefer it, ignorant and blind?
We cover our ears, eyes and mouths

Last line doesn't quite fit with the overall time. Maybe add "and minds" at the end, or something, just to fill out the time a bit.

These monkeys were not evil,
they were pacifists
But what use is a pacifist
if he is maimed?

I like this. Very poetic.

So hear this, monkeys;
If we are aware of hell,
we can keep it from springing fourth
If we close ourselves from it
It will only grow stronger

Too obvious for my liking. But then again, it seems to work. Maybe you can write it a bit more subtly.

The weakest man is a turned one
with his back to the sword
If you do not know this
you are learning

I don't think this is necessary, just a repetition of the last stanza. You've made your point already, end it or move on. Maybe if the last stanza was more subtle, you could have a second one, but at the moment it is just a bit annoying.

Oh, never mind me
just turn away
dismiss me like you do to
all your predators

A bit anticlimatic...


Okay, overall: not a bad piece. Needs some work, but I would give it a 3 and a half out of 5. With a bit of work this could be really good.

Crit mine?
Tonight
Gecko Gospel