#1
Dmusic is just being downright mean to me at the moment. Sorry, but here's the youtube link -

http://youtube.com/watch?v=G4ybsZimi1g

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2004 MIM Strat w/ Fender Hot Noiseless pickups
Sovtek MiG 60
Avatar 2x12 w/ Celestion Greenbacks
Snark Tuner
MXR Custom Comp
Fulltone Full-Drive 2
Dunlop JHM3 Univibe
TC electronic Nova Delay
TC electronic Arena Reverb
#2
1) I would increase the volume on the vocals in the first part. When you sing "we live in a beautiful world", it cuts through nicely but at first you're straining to hear the tone of your voice.

2) the quality is nice. maybe put the lead guitar (the effectsy one) a bit lower in the mix and pan it left or right though.... just my thoughts
#3
Thanks! I fixed it. I would gladly crit any of your recordings!

2004 MIM Strat w/ Fender Hot Noiseless pickups
Sovtek MiG 60
Avatar 2x12 w/ Celestion Greenbacks
Snark Tuner
MXR Custom Comp
Fulltone Full-Drive 2
Dunlop JHM3 Univibe
TC electronic Nova Delay
TC electronic Arena Reverb