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Some song I wrote, I'm just looking for some feed back
and yes I know they have a dark tone to them
but most of my songs are usually like dark naratives

my favorite of them all is the second verse in "so called life"


These Bones

Verse 1

These bones were made to break
And god knows, I’ve had what I can take
And I’ve seen nothing but hard times
I’ve broke my dollars for dimes
My love has been burned down
I pray and I hear not a sound
Show me someone's listening
Show me someone cares
Some me something else
These eyes have seen nothing but tears

Chorus

And these bones were made to break
And I’ve had what I can take
Love is one thing I haven’t found
God please, turn this life around

Verse 2

And my fist were made to clinch
Hang my rope from the highest lynch
My hands have seen nothing but blood
My face has been shoved in mud
I spent a lifetime fighting there words
There lies swarm in hordes
Still I get up everyday
I drop to my knees and pray
Show me someone's listening
Show me someone cares
Some me something else
These eyes have seen nothing but tears

Chorus

And these bones were made to break
And I’ve had what I can take
Love is one thing I haven’t found
God please, turn this life around

Bridge

What else is there…

Chorus

And these bones were made to break
And I’ve had what I can take
Love is one thing I haven’t found
Let start up a second round

SO CALLED LIFE

Verse

This so called life is not what it seems
Living life as a dream
All I ask is something more
Than all these lies I must endure
No one knows who we really are
Fate is just a falling star
All looks but no mind
Searching inside for something to find
Melancholy life every day
There has to be another way


Chorus
Nothing but bull****
Fake lies that wont quit
Broken promises never end
Shattered hearts never mend
Pain suffering sadness strife
nothing but a so-called life


Verse

This so called death is not that great
Lost the power to control my fate
Walking down deaths stairs
Living life through my nightmare
Life has lost and so have I
Pray to god, let me die
Giving up, my mind is loose
Grab the rope and hang the noose


Chorus
Nothing but bull****
Fake lies that wont quit
Broken promises never end
Shattered hearts never mend
Pain suffering sadness strife
nothing but a so-called life

Her Disease

Hes her disease
He gets in-side her
With every lie that binds her
Hess the cancer
Her question, no answer
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She’s says I love you, Hess says it to
But her eyes can glance, right on through
She sees his lies, and what has really for
She cries in her sleep, prays no more
She puts up with it all, no matter how bad
She look up in tears, his eyes seem glad
Her heart is broken, but there is no glue
A few days pass, hell say I love you
She knows it happens again, but won’t believe
She waits a few more days, and back comes grieve
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Hes her disease
He gets in-side her
With every lie that binds her
Has the cancer
Her question, no answer
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Five days past, and there’s the weekend
His phone will ring, another great friend
Has says im going and I’ll be at the bar
She knows whets wrong, her loves strains far
He comes home drunk, another Friday night
She waits in her room, hopes for no fight
But it happens again, and the pain takes her
This time she knows, there will be no more
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He swings his fist, she grabs a knife
He broke her heart, she ends his life
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Your born and told, love can never fail
Has the criminal, but she’ll go to jail
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Not a happy ending, she sits in her cell
They ask for the story, but she wont’ tell
Lays back down, wipes the blood from her hair
There’s only one guarantee…..nothing is fair
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Hes her disease
He gets in-side her
With every lie that binds her
Has the cancer
Her question, no answer
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Nothing is Fair…….


I Can’t Believe

I can’t believe the things you’re saying; Hints of lies always flow through
And why you tell me that you love me, I find your words hard to be true
And then you say don’t you believe me, I say those words are just a speech
The gift of trust is one I don’t have, some people know but they can’t teach

Your words, Are hard, for me, to take
Your love, my heart, One Lie, Will Break

You look into my eyes with tears; I say you have your issues to
You’re just another lying hypocrite, Problems that you cannot work through
She stares at me in her disbelief, you don’t believe me but you can
I know I’m just another loser, but trust is one thing I don’t have

Your words, Are hard, for me, to take
Your love, my heart, One Lie, Will Break