#1
c4c leave link,
i forgot about last time, if i owe you one remind me please


ots


In the most crowded of areas,
invested with the art of sedation,
we find something not commonly known

so casually, and beautifully placed,
but yet in the end, causes haste,
in these suburban areas,

So seductively placed,
a discriminating sense of taste,
but that is as far as the pleasure goes.

Accidents or framed murder you decide,
yet once all is done, there is nothing that can be said
after all, all you can do is try.


ehh idk

again c4c
ots
#3
i liked it, the middle two verses are the standouts to me. leave a short comment on 'nature / human nature'?
i need to hear some sounds that recognize the pain in me, yeah.