#1
A song written by my friend for our band. It is meant to be played with an acoustic in the background. Any comments or things we could add/delete to make it better. Thanks in advance.

Vanity

Verse 1:
Take your time to get ready
Stare into the mirror all you want
Look pretty for that cute boy
But he won't love you like I did

Verse 2:
Stare deep into that mirror
You know you can't erase your past girl
Put on your best clothes, kiss him
I'd bet my lips are sweeter than his

Chorus:
You're loneliness is showing, my friend
Your vanity will be your end
You've got nothing left to defend
Your vanity will be your end

Verse 3:
Peeking over your shoulder
I know you're staring over, my dear
Did you ever really love?
I'm dreaming to think the answer was yes

Chorus:
Your loneliness is showing my friend
Your vanity will be your end
You've got nothing left to defend
Your vanity will be your end

Verse 4:
You left me broken hearted
You left me out in the dark
You're still my number one, baby
I hope you know this is true

Chorus:
Your loneliness is showing my friend
Your vanity will be your end
You've got nothing left to defend
Your vanity will be...

Outro Altered Chorus:
Your loneliness is showing my friend
Your vanity will be my end
I wish that you'd love me again
Your vanity will be my end
#2
Really REALLY generic sounding cliche, sappy love story...

Didn't much care for it, sorry : /