#2
lol not to put you down but thats more disturbing than anything
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Ibanez GSZ 120
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Boss MT-2 Metalzone
Boss NS-2 Noise Suppressor
Marshall MG100 DFX
#4
Some good word play and even 'image play' for that matter, and you were able to maintain descent flow, though certainly not your best in that catagory. I certainly go tthe feeling of intense sex her, possibly lustful, possibly even more. make me want to make a booty call real quick. haha.

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