#1
www.myspace.com/lookingtothesummer

We just started out yesterday and i need some opinions on my vocals, the first song is the only one with vocals and its not completely done yet

i also need opinions on my guitar solo about 2/3s of the way into the song


feedback please!!!
#2
eh, you guys are alright. not exactly my music despite my name (the names a joke). especially because its after a few days. your voice is good, you could work on it a little though. no ones perfect though. except for the church.
#5
you ahve a great voice in my opinion the guitar solo its allright but its pretty good
#10
i like it man.
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#12
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you honestly like it?


thanks guys


yeah man. i like your voice.
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#14
I like it, but I don't like the keys in the solo
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#16
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I've got a strong feeling of Deja Vu


The song was good though, especially if it was done in one day.
#18
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thanks alot bro, im gonna work on my vocals, in my opinion they sound sketchy


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thanks alot bro


Quote by jivistheshizz
you honestly like it?


thanks guys


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thanks alot bro, the support means alot


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thanks man, yeah we were thinking the same thing, but now well take em out

thanks!


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thanks alot bro


lol....

here's a bump for the humor. :P
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#19
hah, i didnt used to say anything when people would give me feedback but when i would look at other peoples they would always say thanks and stuff

lol
#20
Good stuff, i quite like it, particularly the vocal harmonies, it's always good to see those make an apearance. It's right in with the influences you give so thats good to see. A little repetitive maybe, but that goes with the territory, having joined a pop-punk group recently I should know!

Anyway, what it could be doing is just a bit of careful tweaking and the solo could be developed a little, push yourself a bit and see how it turns out.

C4C?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=810250

EDIT: Nevermind, you already got a crit in before i posted this!
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