Here's a solo I whipped up (second one I've written overall). Please tell me what you like/don't like about it, and what I can do to improve it.

Thanks a lot!

Last edited by playinbass1432 at Mar 6, 2008,
To be honest, it's pretty boring. But if that's only your second solo, you definitely have the hang of it. Keep practicing, and try to incorporate more dynamics. Work on writing more melodically interesting licks.
Maybe U2 wouldn't suck so hard if they stopped preaching and started rocking instead. Of course, that's difficult to do with Pantera holding a near monopoly on all things that rock.
You guys are right, I wrote it for a simple rock song me and my friend are working on, so I didnt do anything too fancy. Thanks for the crit!
Haha, generic solo! (Doesn't mean it's bad :P)

I really liked it, nothing too complex or original, but it gets the job done. Like some said, put it in a "Good Ol' Hard Rock" song and it's just fabulous!

Make a whole song now!

7/10 -> Creativity
10/10 -> Good Ol' Hard Rock solo!

Cheers for the crit^^
Last edited by DarkTom666 at Mar 7, 2008,
Quote by DarkTom666
Gp4 please? I can't crit or else

Cheers for the crit^^

Ok one sec...

EDIT: GP4s up now.
Last edited by playinbass1432 at Mar 6, 2008,