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Voters: 9.
#1
I hope you guys like it
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The Paradox gp5.2,4,midi.zip
Quote by Roc8995
I ran into some fingering issues. I can get it up to speed the way I've been fingering it, but I'm wondering if you guys have any better ideas, because it seems like there should be an easier way to finger this.


Don't worry there is Roc, there is
Last edited by IamBeast at Mar 7, 2008,
#2
Very nice intro. It had a very old scary feel to it. When it picked up it got a bit generic I thought. It'd be a very cool song for a video game. Like when something is about to go down. I like the uneasiness of it a lot. I think smoother transitions would also make it better.

http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=805725
Crit my acoustic piece please.
#3
Well, i like it.

.....kinda..

it got Really repetitive, to the point where i skipped ahead a bit.
Maybe add a different type of riff in there? Not the same patterns.

i thought that having the keyboard play the lead part was kind of original.

My favorite part was probably the interlude at 112, but you had maybe a bit too much dissonance, and the solo wasn't anything special, and it needed a rhythm part to compliment it.

all in all, it was good, but it could have been alot better
7.5/10

Crit mine please?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=803741
#4
Quote by p!r4Te
Well, i like it.

.....kinda..

it got Really repetitive, to the point where i skipped ahead a bit.
Maybe add a different type of riff in there? Not the same patterns.
i thought that having the keyboard play the lead part was kind of original.


where did it get repetitive exaxtly so i can adjust that point i think you may be talking about the last riffs before the interlude but i am unsure
Quote by Roc8995
I ran into some fingering issues. I can get it up to speed the way I've been fingering it, but I'm wondering if you guys have any better ideas, because it seems like there should be an easier way to finger this.


Don't worry there is Roc, there is
#5
It wasn't bad.
The intro had a dark atmosphere which was cool.
Bar 27 was probably my favorite.
Most of the riffs were kinda boring since the pattern was way too repetitive.
Bar 112 and on was cool, but like p!r4te said, too much dissonnance.
The solo wasn't great, and no rythm?

Other than that, cool song.

7/10