#1
Song: Suicidal Thoughts

Verse 1:
Lying here in my bed
Suicidal thoughts deep inside my head
Conscious telling me im 6 feet to high,
Now i wait for my heart to stop
and my soul to die

Chorus:
Suicidal thoughts creeping in my mind
Blood racing down my spine
Hate in my eye, but the reality is,
I'm gonna die

Verse 2
Blood on the floor, my life decaying to the core,
my soul is sinking, ripped out by the devil,
Earth no longer, and now its time for the one way trip, to HELL

Chorus
Suicidal thoughts creeping in my mind
Blood racing down my spine
Hate in my eye, but the reality is,
I'm gonna die

Need a verse 3 .....and no i do not wanna commit suicide...
#2
not sure where this is going, the whole blood down the spine thing sounds a little to deep in meaning, i dont know if people can really relate to that line
#3
:/

why write emo lyrics and bring everyone else down?
put on some jack johnson, bob marley, and john butler and be happy.
#4
First off, suicidal thought's = suicidal thought is. Which makes no sense. But I'm glad you realized it in time to write the proper title in your post.

And it's borderline disturbing. So I won't attempt to crit it. Sorry bout that. +1 to the guy above me.