#1
This an abstract piece. Its just a bunch of ideas I've had floating around that i've pieced together into one song. C4C. Battlecry after the sun sets


The king sits upon his throne
Evil let thy name be known
And his voice shall echo through the valleys of pain
Beyond the forest where the wolf was slain

Were victims of our own destiny
No reason to lead this life
Will this night ever die?
just a battlecry...
When the sun sets

Trapped inside the magic forest
Me and a raven sang out together
"This tale will go on forever!"

Guide the path of where the snow blows
To a darkened sphere hiding behind space
Let me back to a time where the winds of frost
Blew out the fire that burns in our hearts

Behold the battle magic!
Its so f***ing tragic
Behold the terror of a thousand souls
With seven songs of rejoice

Were victims of our own destiny
No reason to lead this life
Will this night ever die?
just a battlecry...
When the sun sets

The darkness frightens me
Will i ever belong to this symphony of sadness
Can anything cure this madness?

And on a throne far away a raven sits
And it can steal the hearts of men
Its a legacy reborn
Its a frozen thorn!

Were victims of our own destiny
No reason to lead this life
Will this night ever die?
just a battlecry...
When the sun sets
Raise your chalice my brother
Raise it high
To catch the fire that falls from the sky
#2
That sounds like Dragonforce. =)

But seriously, interesting theme. Haven't seen much of this style around here. But honestly, the writing wasn't that strong. It was compelling, nevertheless. Very nice try, mate.