#1

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#3
shroomhound.. you're a bit of a douche man, it takes practice to write insanely crazy riffs. to you TS, good job on the new riff, and ignore any negative comments. honestly, this is a really typical riff and style, especially in metalcore, but it's a start. just keep writing, and your riffs will get better and better and more unique. good job
#4
I made another one the other day at 4AM.

Here it is


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http://youtube.com/watch?v=UGRJYWJgPBA
#5
And actually, the first riff was kinda me trying to make a mainstream rock riff...Kinda like Three Days Grace.

I have a goal that I have to make atleast one riff every night. So far, I've made 6.

I'm going to work on another one right now.