#1
i got this line and its going in a direction i like but it seems kinda crappy to me...

one day his feathers will molt
to reveal a blackbird
but by then they'll realize whats been sold
and his voice will remain unheard

feels like im trying to hard i think.
feel free to add or tell me i suck
i just want some feedback
#2
Quote by a_coo_stick
i got this line and its going in a direction i like but it seems kinda crappy to me...

one day his feathers will molt
to reveal a blackbird
but by then they'll realize whats been sold
and his voice will remain unheard

feels like im trying to hard i think.
feel free to add or tell me i suck
i just want some feedback


dont like verse 2. :p

what does it all mean?
#3
"verse 2" isnt part of the lyrics lol

it's him asking for feedback

but yeah, it seems alright
#4
it's an ok start. Just got continue with it.
It'll be easier for us to give feedback on something a little more complete
But as a start it's gd
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