ok this is only like the second thing ive ever tried and its only casual thrown together riffs... some parts seem out of place but im hoping to get some criticism to be able to make it better! so thank you to anyone who crits it
That was ****...

Kidding. A little confused on the intro

My GP expired, but the audio file was cool... one favor: record it and YouTube it.
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i liked it but the i think you should get rid of the repeats in the intro because it dragged on too much and bored me.
Sounds like it's straight out of Doom 2. The old PC shooter
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