I know this is nuthing compared to the stuff on this thread but i thought id share.... it :S
Might want to start with posting a link son.
its in my profile sorry...
May want to tune your guitar a little better, and watch for clipping during recording. Practice using a metronome also. Keep trying though.
The quality is **** but thats allright cause the song was okay. It would probably sound a lot better with a band behind it. I didn't like the effects you had on the guitar but the song overall was pretty good. Can you crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=13224682#post13224682