I know this is nuthing compared to the stuff on this thread but i thought id share.... it :S
May want to tune your guitar a little better, and watch for clipping during recording. Practice using a metronome also. Keep trying though.
70's Japan Greco SuperPower
Amps: '65 TRRI - Peavey Classic 50 4x10 - Epiphone VJ Head (Modded) - 2x12 Celestion Greenback Cab
FX: BK Tube Driver - EH Small Stone - MXR CC
Acoustics: Breedlove ADSM20 - Alveraz 5021 12-String