#1
Just finished up most of the parts for this one. I've been working on it in the dorms; very Fripp-ish. It's hectic at points, just bare with it...

Bassist just finished up his tracks, so I thought it was ready for the internets.

Thoughts, criticism, and suggestions welcome.

-Cognitive Decay-
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Quote by greenday1182
i just heard the most amazing solo ever. it's in a song called "holiday" by green day. its even harder than some of blink 182s stuff!! im gonna learn this solo right now! give it a listen, its really good sounding and not too easy.
#2
sounded pretty great dude, I like the progressive stuff.
Only thing I could suggest is maybe have a singer so people don't get bored,
not saying I did but maybe other people would.
#3
i love the reversy/keyboard riff in the intro...very mood building. this was rather jazzy...i like all the interlocking riffs. this deffinately made me feel pretty psycadelic mushroom hazed. very cool ideas. what did you use for the drums? i really like them.


partII was amazing. the chord proggression seemed rather floydian to me. the bass line was really cool and growly at this point which i dug.

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=13265751#post13265751
Too cool for a signature.
#4
thanks for the responses, the intro is actually natural harmonics reversed. They do sound cool though.

Drums were the standard EZDrummer drums, only I pitch shifted them down an octave, gives em that industrial feel. I drop the pitch shift once the second part begins.

thanks again
Quote by greenday1182
i just heard the most amazing solo ever. it's in a song called "holiday" by green day. its even harder than some of blink 182s stuff!! im gonna learn this solo right now! give it a listen, its really good sounding and not too easy.
#5
just before i crit i must say trepination IS VERY GD... mmmmmmm i like the intro of this one, sounds like pink floyd, i like your unconventional style, very individual which i like alot, liek the feedback bits etc keep the song interesting however that riff that goes on for a long tiem gets a little boring, overall gd work and keep it up

could you crit mine please http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=808371

thnx