#1
I wrote this song a little while ago just for fun, but now I'm using it for what it should be used for: a girl. So, please read, critique it, leave suggestions, anything. Thanks.

Beneath Her Wings
This beautiful angel who haunts my mind
Words to describe I cannot find
Stunning eyes and warming smile
Both invite me to stay a while
Lay beneath the moon, inhaling summer air
The light forms a halo, shining off your hair
Surprised by the siren song
None of us has very long

Chorus
When this nuclear sun lights the sky
The whole of humanity is sentenced to die
But we stand proudly unaffected
Beneath her wings we are protected

Verse 2
Reborn, becoming the strongest one
Showing the doubters we are not done
Lost in the dark, no one kenw what it all meant
Luckily, you showed the way on this descent
You are the one who redifines the meaning of life
Saving our souls in the midst of constant strife
Even if it means living only one more day
I wouldn't want things any other way
(chorus)
Verse 3

The armies assemble for the elder generation
Ready to assualt these inhuman creations
As you guide them to the final destination
Striking with precision
Quickly slay these abominations
Celebration comes as we defend our race
But no one forgets, you were the saving grace
Freedom is ours on this day
#7
Quote by crooked^smile
lyrics seem amazing. wish i could hear it.



yes seeing as felty doesn't play guitar or sing, ill be doing that. But i must warn you, my voice sucks.
Your Mean

I hate you now

Let's be friends and play!

#8
Quote by ajmix2
yes seeing as felty doesn't play guitar or sing, ill be doing that. But i must warn you, my voice sucks.


yo aj, thats true.
#9
this is great dude i could see this winning WotM or WotW i honestly can't fing anything to crit except for one spelling error. kenw is knew. love it cant wait to see more

crit for crit link in sig