#1
this is a song i wrote for my friend let me know what you guys think its called its alright


Its alright you’ll be ok
Please don’t feel that way
You know its not that bad
You know Its gonna be alright
Tomorrows a new day
And you’ll feel better tomorrow


It’s gonna be alright
And now don’t you cry
You’ll be alright
you’ll be better tomorrow
Its gonna be alright

you’ve got to move on
You got to just say good bye
What’s done is done
Its better not to dwell on the past
You just have to let all it go
And you can make it at last

It’s gonna be alright
And now don’t you cry
You’ll be alright
you’ll be better tomorrow
Its gonna be alright

you’ve got to be strong
And It wouldn’t be that bad
I think I know how you feel
Everything gonna be alright
You don’t have to feel that way
Cause tomorrows a new day

solo 1

It’s gonna be alright
And now don’t you cry
You’ll be alright
you’ll be better tomorrow
Its gonna be alright

solo 2
#2
it feels like its too plain, theres some nice parts, but others just dont seem original enough.
#3
it doesnt really say much. pretty much "its all right. tomorrow will be better. and dont cry" (im not trying to be mean its just how this came across to me)
#4
its a little repetitive but not in like the good way it just keeps kinda saying the first differently

but don't worry cuz that 1st part sounds kinda okay for a chorus u just gotta make up some more varried verses
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