#1
for my playwriting class i need to write a scene involving a secret moment. a secret moment is when a character does something, or gives up some piece of information that only that character and the audience knows about.

for example, if before a dinner party, a character crept out onto the stage and poured poison into a glass on the table before anyone else came out, it would be a secret moment.

the only thing is, that im kinda coming up blank for ideas, so i was wondering if anyone could think up anything that could work/help get me on the right track.

i was thinking something along the lines of a bunch of shipwrecked survivors are on an abandoned island and one of the characters has a stash of food/essentials/survival gear that he doesnt tell any of the others about. he would pull out a candy bar or something when no one is around, etc, but i cant really see it going anywhere great and it kinda seems like a Lost rip off...

so, any ideas?
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#2
someone jizzes in the mayo.

Then the rest of the cast come in and make some sandwiches.

Sandwiches with lots of mayo.
#3
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someone jizzes in the mayo.

Then the rest of the cast come in and make some sandwiches.

Sandwiches with lots of mayo.


/thread.
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#4
"I screwed her, but she doesn't know I have AIDS."
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#5
alright, now that we got the jizz and mayo jokes out of the way, any other suggestions?


even tho the AIDs idea is kinda intriguing, i might have to think about one. and im kinda serious.
Remember through sounds
Remember through smells
Remember through colors
Remember through towns
-Modest Mouse, "Novocaine Stain"
#6
An elderly person finds out that they have dementia.

But by the time they get to talk to their family about it they've forgotten.
#7
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alright, now that we got the jizz and mayo jokes out of the way, any other suggestions?


even tho the AIDs idea is kinda intriguing, i might have to think about one. and im kinda serious.


"I screwed her, but she doesn't know I have AIDS. Also, she doesn't know I'm her son."

It'll be like a modern day Oedipus.
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Parker Nitefly Mojo sonnn
Jackson DK2M Dinky
Carvin Legacy
Fender Blues Jr.
Roland Cube 30X