i really like your voice, quite individual, but sounds liek your putting an american accent on, assuming ur british as you go to college here. The first tempo change is really good and quickens the song up which keeps it interesting, the second tempo change is a bit iffy and could be done better i think. keep up the gd work mate

could you crit mine please http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=808371

"sounds like you're putting on an ammerican accent"

I was born in the wrong place.

I'll crit both of yours right this second.

Second, you say?

No, I'm third.

Guess I'm just hanging around, wating for God to drop a beer into my hand, or something. Go and read my new poem

love is a dog from hell.

we have sound makes greatest comment ever.

anyways, i liked it dude. cool voice, made me think of older music. not to much to say other than that, to me honest haha. 7/10

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=809630
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