apart from the bad recording the quality it was really gd, ur voice reminds me of a slightly less extreme version of matt bellamy, maybe like Radiohead, the opening chord sequence sounds original unliek most stuff u here which is all the same generic stuff :P i think if you speeded it up a bit it would be better, but overall gd job, dya have any links to any of your other songs???

could you crit mine please http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=808371