#2
wow, pretty good. nice acoustic intro. really nice acoustic tone, but there were some places it sound a lil distorted. ur vocals r pretty good, fit the song really nicely. there were some pitch problems in some places, but not to bad. some really solid work, keep it up.

could u crit mine
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=808224
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#3
Hmmm not bad over all, you just need to dial in the singing a bit more.
Ever thought of trying it on a twelve string?
#4
If i had a 12 string i would totaly give it a shot, but i dont.

'67 Gibson SG Standard
MXR Phase 90 | Ibanez Tubescreamer TS9 | Vox V847A Wah-Wah
'65 Fender Bassman
#5
anyone else

'67 Gibson SG Standard
MXR Phase 90 | Ibanez Tubescreamer TS9 | Vox V847A Wah-Wah
'65 Fender Bassman
#6
the intro is really gd and strong, the tone of the guitar is gd, the voice is okay but could do with some fine tuning but okay unless ur trying to like get really famous, the chorus is good and reminds me of radiohead. i liek the bit where it slows down and u play one chord at a time and then it goes back into the chorus which is gd the ending is also gd, keep up the gd work

could you crit mine please http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=808371

thnx