#2
right to start off, dont use such horrible distortoin. Its not nice. The way you play your chords is wrong, individual yes, but wrong. THAT is why you mess up. Play chords properly. I like the fact you didnt skip the guitar interlude things, but you do need to practice them more.

Practice practice practice thats all i need to say.

crite mine?

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Ibanez Delay
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#4
You REALLY need to use your pinky. Seriously, I can tell that it is greatly hindering your ability. When you're doing those blues shuffles, you should be using your index, ring, and pinky. With only 3 fingers, you won't be able to play as quickly as you can with 4.
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