#1
i recorded a song. its called song for a lonely astronaut. its about this astronaut who leaves his girl and goes to space, then feels remorse. in part two, he meets an alien.

please take a listen, theres something in it for everyone.


myspace.com/beattherushmusic


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Last edited by sidvicious182 at Mar 12, 2008,
#2
the guitar was pretty cool. i thought it was a bit loud compaired to the vocals. also the vocals could be smoother and/or more emotional. the lyrics seemed to be the strong point in this song. they were really good! the chorus melody was really well written. recording quality could improve.

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=809440
Too cool for a signature.
#4
wow thats really awesome im not gonna lie im gonna add your band and your going in my top good job entertaining me