#1

okie dokie, so i am pretty knew to the guitar scene. i just got my guitar past christmas, but i was in a song-writing mood, and this is what i came up with. i am still unsure if i like it all the way, but then again, i am a total perfectionist. comments, suggestions, etc. welcome. by the way, it is uncomplete right now :]


i've got my eye on you.
a life of regrets.
the life of a spy.
so mysterious
telling his lies.

i hide, i seek
you stride, i sneak.
my clues lead to you
and i'm ready to pursue.

i watch from afar
as you got in your car
i knew you were the one
when you glanced from side to side
now try to hide.
i've got my eye on you.

i hide, i seek
you stride, i sneak.
my clues lead to you
and i'm ready to pursue.

EXOTICA
#3
For some reason, I actually really like this one.

Ooh, maybe in the last chorus you could change "my clues lead to you" to "all clues lead to you". Just a suggestion, I personally like variety in choruses.

But yeah, this is actually really cool. I like the vibe a lot.
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#4

ooh, yayaya :]
i'm glad you guys like it!
i will definitely take your suggestions into consideration.
thanksss ^__^

EXOTICA