#1
A song I wrote. C4C. With stars beside us -

I hear a whisper with the wind
Tainted soul of ye who sinned
Raise your goblet
Raise it high
And catch the fire from the sky
Oh you stars of mine
Why do you refuse to shine?

Into battle we ride
With stars by our side
Blood is frozen beneath the frost
Follow the star and don’t get lost

The search for the sword has begun
Solar song become un-sung

[solo here]

Into battle we ride
With stars by our side
Blood is frozen beneath the frost
Follow the star and don’t get lost

Always hoping for one last breath
Shadowed by the black sails of death
Before Valhalla there is only war
Battle shadowed by the horsemen four
Steel gleaming forever fast
Death travels forwards from the past
The armada sets a course
Under his scythe force

Into battle we ride
With stars by our side
Blood is frozen beneath the frost
Follow the star and don’t get lost
Free-fall forever
We ride on together

Into battle we ride
With stars by our side
Blood is frozen beneath the frost
Follow the star and don’t get lost
Raise your chalice my brother
Raise it high
To catch the fire that falls from the sky
#2
it's not bad, it has some good language in it, but it could use a little more work.
i give it a 4/5
Looks like someone woke up on the wrong side of the cake this morning!

yeah, that's an inside joke. i made it different colors and sizes to be obnoxious...