#1
Umm, this is an interlude me and my friend just made, I think it's really depressing/urgent sounding. Let me know what you think, crit4crit.
Attachments:
Interlude.zip
#2
i think it would sound better not tremolo picked. Just hit the notes.
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#3
The trem picking is cool. Leave it.

Its way short though, it would be cool if the bass did something different/more interesting, but... I mean, its 4 bars. Too hard to say anything other than it sounds good.

Also, if its an interlude, change it up a bit more/make it have different stuff in it... 4 bars beaten into the ground would bug me.
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#5
The reason there is no drums is because I can't make/think of drums. And by interlude I mean it would be put inbetween songs on an album, more of a transition per say. Thanks though, anything you guys want critted?
#6
I really liked it so i wrote kinda an intro into a song.
Attachments:
New Song (Heavy).zip
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#7
Headbanger that was pretty cool.

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