This song is a upbeat kind of sound, imspired by the bucket by kings of leon. Its just a rambling verse, no chorus or anything else

Took me 15 years just to reach you
15 more just to teach you
18 thousand miles just to se you
18 thousand more just to see my truth
You get the glory, you get the fame
You take the money, ill take the blame
Walk across the desert, swim through the sea
Run from the wrecking ball that i cant see
So take all your clothes, and take all your books
Take your guitar, and your good looks
You will be the one to reolize, what you just left behind
And all i ever found in you was a lie

I would like to hear feedback good and bad, whatever you guys think
you'll want to post this in the main forum. take a look at the rules first, though. they're in an announcement at the top of the forum.

i'll report this for removal, and you can repost it over there.

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It seems like UG is full of those Caveman Metalheads

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I meant caveman as in long haired....

Please read the rules.

This is posted in the wrong section of the forums. It should be in the main S&L forum. Normally I would just move it, but it's also wrongly titled.

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