#1
Check it out on my profile. The First Song.

Shadows Of Death


It very melodic and i have a more metal tone on this. I used my EHX Metal Muff for it all this time.

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Donkey+Fly/

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Ty
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Last edited by Donkey Fly at Mar 15, 2008,
#2
Really good recording... excellent riffing and soloing. I really like your style. The instrumental Shadows of Death is a well written song... lots of different techniques used and good rhythm and lead skills showed. Good work.

If you'd crit mine I'd really appreciate it.
EDIT: forgot the link! haha
http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=812670
Last edited by RSpahr16 at Mar 15, 2008,
#4
This is really cool. The combination of the guitar riffs and the synth was just awesome. All of the riffs and licks were really good. I really liked it whenever the synth kicked in over the guitars. Nice solo too - good playing.

This was a very well produced and played song. The only improvement I can think of is to add some vocals. I guess you could keep it instrumental, and it certainly sounds fine that way - but my personal preference is to have some vocals in there.

Crit mine?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=812003

Thanks!
#5
nice. very epic sounding. ur distorted tone sounds really good. and the synths r a great touch. some cool riffage, and great leads. the solo fit the song perfectly, it was played brilliantly. keep up the rockin metal.

could u crit mine
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=808224
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#7
Quote by thec0dy
Awesome, this should be what all metal sounds like

What do you use for you're drums?


Check me out on myspace! And add me if you're on there!
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It's Acoustica Beatcraft with a new snare sample on them all apart from Rise Of The Wicked which is when i used to use the original snare sample from beatcraft.

Thanks for all the crit.
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#8
That tone is wicked, man! EHX Metal Muff, eh? I want one after hearing this song.

Very well laid out song, it has nice rises and falls and keeps things interesting. Sometimes this music goes balls-out 100% of the time, and it gets boring. You made it very diverse, so it kept me rocking out all the way to the end.

Your playing is fantastic, as well. Nice solo work. The mix/production is outstanding as well.

I give it a 9/10.

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#9
Quote by zeroyon
That tone is wicked, man! EHX Metal Muff, eh? I want one after hearing this song.

Very well laid out song, it has nice rises and falls and keeps things interesting. Sometimes this music goes balls-out 100% of the time, and it gets boring. You made it very diverse, so it kept me rocking out all the way to the end.

Your playing is fantastic, as well. Nice solo work. The mix/production is outstanding as well.

I give it a 9/10.

Check mine out? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=812259


Yer, it's a good pedal once you get the settings right - definately worth the money though.
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Xbox Live GT = The Donkey Fly
'...and those who fought on that day of honor, the day of victory shall be forever remembered as Lime Green' - Oct 31st 08
#10
First of all I must comment on your tone, I think it sounds excellent. Great quality recording as well. The riffs in this song are awesome, as are the solo's. I loved the one at around 1:54, some lovely shredding there. I can honestly say that there are no flaws in this song at all, I thought it was amazing. Your drums sound pretty sweet too. Overall, an excellent piece there, well done!

Crit mine here https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=808764 It's the same one you've already seen, but i have added both vocals (wozzsta did them) and a solo now, like you suggested.
#11
i liked your tone, but it was a bit fuzzy...are you mic'ing your amp or DI-ing it? playing was excellent as well...i like the new snare sample...all the harmonies in this song were awsome...the part around 1;20 sounded really irish to me for some reason haha!. soloing was awsome! i love all the whammy tricks and tapping...this really made me headbang..

check mine out? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=809440
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#12
Wow, some epic shizzle there. Everything worked real well with eachother, synth, drums, guitars..good stuff. Some parts had like a southern type metal feel, others had a little like Neo Classical Death metal hahahahaha. Good stuff mang.
#13
i think my favorite part was the synth, the whole thing was great i did the surfer style slower headbang throughout the parts with synth and i liked the thing as a whole, what did you use for synth? 9/10 good job, the only reason a 9/10 is because the solo, while good, i didnt really dig. Great work dude.

(Don't crit me i dont have anything uploaded yet)

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