#1
Well i don't know about the pre-chorus, it doesn't really fit to the rest of the song.
and i think i used ''screw up'' too often but i didn't what instead i could write.
and i don't have a good song title for it


Verse 1
I remember like it was just yesterday
She was ten feet away and looked at me
I just had to walk over to her
and everything would've been fine

Pre-Chorus
but suddenly there was this anxiety
that i'd screw up everything

Chorus1
And so I turned around and pretend she don't exist
what the hell does she want from me and why can't I look away
why does she care about me and why is she
so damn beautiful

Verse2
She tried over and over again
and I srewed it up over and over again
we could be happily together
and everything would've been fine

Pre-Chorus

Chorus

Bridge
Now she doesn't give a damn about me
i missed my chance
now i see what i've done wrong
i know my mistake
i wish i didn't make this happen, i screwed it up the worst time
and now nothing's gonna be alright

Chorus3
And so she turned around and pretend i don't exist
what the hell do i want from her and why can't i look away
why do i care about her and why is she
so damn beautiful
so damn beautiful
so damn beautiful


that's it, to me it`s a nice punk rock song.
how do think about it?