I think its kind of cool. Maybe some drums on the second half to fill it out just a tad more? What did you use?
Power Tab and some clean guitar over the top.
Quote by eggo_boi_15
Arnt the first few things anyone learns on a guitar is

1. Nirvana - smells like teen spirit
2. Prince - Smoke on the water
3. White stripes - seven nation army

^ lol