I recorded a section of a song last night at about 2AM and put it on youtube and figured, whats the best place to come get critiques (And shamless "UG FOREVAAAAR" posts on youtube) Than here.

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You make me feel
Like a dog, you can see, my emotions
Is this for real, i'm a man
Sinking deep, in the ocean
There were some spots I thought you were going to run with the vocals... but you kept a pretty even keel all the way through.

In the line "I'm missing you so much more today" You could've shot up to a higher note on the word "you" and held it just a little bit to give the vocals some dynamic. Sorry I don't know the note, but I can hear it in my head.

Cool song, keep working on it!

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