The soloing and general vibe is good, but you need a bass in there. There's not much low end in the song.
Fender MIA Telecaster with DiMarzio noiseless single coils
-Fulltone OCD
-Ibanez Analog Delay
-Dunlop Crybaby Wah
Fender Blues Junior
Fender MIM Jazz Bass with Noiseless pickups
Mesa Walkabout
Epiphone AC200SCE Acoustic
thats got a kinda ''im gonna kill you slowly with my guitar'' sound, ya know what i mean?

i think its great!
Too tired and lazy to bother with a sig, Sorry.