#1
Sorry mum, sorry dad, but i have to leave this place
surrounded by fields and death, i have to leave you discraced
but i have a dream as a brave man said and now its my turn
i need nothing but my guitar and pad, and some special tobacco to burn

i had that education and those fancy toys
but i want to use my brains for something pure
im sure you saw me in a fancy suit and with a successful girl
but i want to wear my instrument and drink till i hurl
one day i will have the girl and that fast car
but not from playing it straight, i wanna be a rock star

ive no need for school my inspiration will be from life
ill struggle through and blag it all, itll give me something to write about
i dont need a degree they dont have one on being cool
i may be a dreamer and want to reach for whats out of my grasp
but just because i may play it, you can never call me a fool

i had that education and those fancy toys
but i want to use my brains for something pure
im sure you saw me in a fancy suit and with a successful girl
but i want to wear my instrument and drink till i hurl
one day i will have the girl and that fast car
but not from playing it straight, i wanna be a rock star

got my first gig and it aint all i had dreamed
turn up play my songs and get hit by a bottle
mybe i should have concentrated on my guitar but her down front was a hottie
sadly behind every girl theres a guy checking her ass
i wish that had continued so he couldnt have kicked mine
but i still got to play and was payed although i drunk it all away at the end of the night
experiances like that let you know truley who you are
and i may still sound a little daft but i want to be a rockstar.

Just for fun.. haha... crit is welcome... =)
#2
Hey hey, I wanna be a rockstar!


But yeah, pretty funny. I love the last line, lol.
Got on the bus with me daysavaaaa
#10
The topic wasn't exactly original, but most of your writing was. It was kind of funny, and well written. It's pretty good.

If you have some spare time, could you crit Justify The Means? It's on the second page by now...