#1
I am hurt

Seeking for happiness I can’t find
Everything has gone wrong
A hideous burden upon me
Keeps me staying alive
I have became the nothing
I miss seeing the guiding light
Finding comfort in the blacken night
Birth that was a mistake upon myself
Life is killing me…I can touch the end
Why can’t I bring me life without death?
An emotional casket of the becoming
I seal my character inside him
I am the hurt
I am dead inside

Last edited by The Arch Enemy at Mar 16, 2008,
#2
Quote by The Arch Enemy
I am hurt

Seeking for happiness I can’t find
Everything has gone wrong
A hideous burden upon me
Keeps me staying alive
I have became the nothing
I miss seeing the guiding light
Finding comfort in the blacken night
Birth that was a mistake upon myself
Life is killing me…I can touch the end
Why can’t I bring me life without death?
A emotional casket of the becoming
I seal my character inside him
I am the hurt
I am dead inside



this is pretty cool.. and i do this too but just watch your grammar a little.. some of the stuff is made harder to read through it...

e.g. ''a emotional casket'' im pretty sure that would read better with ''an emotional''
and too maybe ''blankened night'' rather than ''blacken night'' i think that may be better..:-)

but overall it seems cool.. very emo but cool... :-)
#3
Quote by Justaboy08
this is pretty cool.. and i do this too but just watch your grammar a little.. some of the stuff is made harder to read through it...

e.g. ''a emotional casket'' im pretty sure that would read better with ''an emotional''
and too maybe ''blankened night'' rather than ''blacken night'' i think that may be better..:-)

but overall it seems cool.. very emo but cool... :-)



It was suppose to be more of a type of negative feel or doom metal.