#1
Constant fire and its hollow rapture
All in existance so you can dip your right hand in blood
Fear does follow faith in this mirror, I concur
Like vines they have intertwined...
Like humankind they've collapsed and torn their immortal skin
Oh it is ironic,
Such logic in which I pursue with smeared ink on this letter directed at you.
This dying generation wears all the latest fashion trends
Smirking with such solemn lies
Sworn to protect a fractured skull
The sin on the tip of this blade
And it forever ends
#3
is it just a coincidence that the first leter of each line spells "CAFLLOSTSSTA"?
Oh, wait, that doesn't mean anything

nice imagery anyway
Fear does follow faith in this mirror, I concur
Like vines they have intertwined...


I especially liked this part
'08 Gretsch White Falcon
'98 Fender USA Deluxe Tele
'79 Greco Les Paul Standard
Airline Stratotone Crafter GAE8

A bunch of funky pedals

Handwired 50 Watt Plexi Lead Clone w/ Orange 4x12
#4
very nice!

nothing wrong except you could probs end with a better line than just "it forever ends"

it sounds empty and leaving us wanting more.
#5
Quote by xdeathxcorex
very nice!

nothing wrong except you could probs end with a better line than just "it forever ends"

it sounds empty and leaving us wanting more.

could be a prologue or epilogue part of the album
or like a concept album or something xD
and thank you everyone for your pos feedback xD