#2
The original sound, the chord prog, needs a MUCH better tone. It's far too muddy. And it doesn't feel like a techno song. It feels like an intro to one. Just clean up the chord progression's tone, and make it so the song feels like it has a point, and walla. Because currently, the song felt like it was going nowhere.

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http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=813804
#3
Quote by Bulzebe
The original sound, the chord prog, needs a MUCH better tone. It's far too muddy. And it doesn't feel like a techno song. It feels like an intro to one. Just clean up the chord progression's tone, and make it so the song feels like it has a point, and walla. Because currently, the song felt like it was going nowhere.

Crit mine?
http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=813804



Hehe yea all my songs go nowhere cause we just got a bassist and we can finally finish up all the potential songs to be. And the sound...eh I was really just messing around with this one.

Loving the song, the melodies sound great and chords too, I just wish there was more bass and it was a little cleaner and louder sounding to add to the whole drum and bass feeling. I wish I could make drum loops for my songs on fl studio, maybe you can teach me sometime hehe.
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