#1
C4C. Shatter The Flame -


This is my eternal song
We journey through the forest long
Is this my queue to enter?
I'll wake in tommorows hour

Feel the nightshade, blood and faith
The darkness hounds our dreams
Cant fault this sinsiter design
Cant fault the passing of time

Cherish forever the longest light
Cherish forever the thickest night
Theres noone to blame
So just shatter the flame

Guide the path of where the snow blows
To a darkened sphere hiding behind space
Let me back to a time where the winds of frost
Blew out the fire that burns in our hearts

I watch through my dreamless eyes
Solar lights strobe the skies
wish i could merge the black and the white
With i could merge the day and the night

Cherish forever the longest light
Cherish forever the thickest night
Theres noone to blame
So just shatter the flame
... shatter the flame

Behold the battle magic!

Cherish forever the longest light
Cherish forever the thickest night
Theres noone to blame
So just shatter the flame
... shatter the flame
Raise your chalice my brother
Raise it high
To catch the fire that falls from the sky
#2
Nice play of words. I like it, the lines fits together and theres a red line throughout the song.

It would probally sound much nicer with music.

Try to go through the lyrics and think of what you wanted to say is what you said
#3
I am in the middle of homework right now, but I love your almost medieval themed songs. I could just imagine you coining the "medieval" metal genre. That would be insane. But from quick glance, it seems good. If I don't respond tonight, perhaps prompt me with a PM...I'm so bad with managing my IOU's.