#1
...is coming to a city near you soon

No, joke, sorry if I offended any of you

Your freedoms on hold
Your token gestures are non descript
This country’s been at war
With itself for far too long

Find some new allies
Suck the world into this ever growing conflict
The whole planet cannot keep alive
As long as we stay here we can’t speak our minds

Death and destruction in the skies
Every breath brings danger into our lives
As long as we live in this eternal fear
As long as we live in this eternal fear

(1st Guitar Solo)

Time to take sides
The fireballs rising above all the lights
Our leaders sit and negotiate
Meanwhile their government’s fire rockets in the night

Trains on missile runs
Bombs and explosions one by one
Can’t take my eyes off of this
Is this the way we should live our lives?

Water flooding over the mines
Strength of man enhances our crimes
Like a bison on the attack charge
Our enemies stream until they die

Like poor animals in captivity
We stay in our test tubes to survive
The rifle butts into the eyes
Can’t you see we’re all going to die?

We can’t hide it’s the end
This time we won’t come back
All you can do is pray
Lie down and hope that we do our task

Choking screaming alibis
We won’t take this with us to the afterlife
Feel the pain and suffering
The core of the earth’s about to implode

(2nd Guitar Solo)

This is the end of the world
This is the end of the world
This is the end of the world
This is the end of the world


Not brilliant but it has a great bass part
#2
it seems okay... i just though 99 red balloons.. haha.. dunno why...lol

although the end ''this is the end of the world'' seems taken from the song 'by my side, The automatic'.. love that song.. haha

oerall seems okay...
Last edited by Justaboy08 at Mar 17, 2008,
#4
im not accusing you of plagarism.. its not that well known a song... however it would appear that had you heard that song there is a posibility of plagarism.. :-)
#5
Quote by Justaboy08
im not accusing you of plagarism.. its not that well known a song... however it would appear that had you heard that song there is a posibility of plagarism.. :-)


http://www.lyricsdir.com/the-automatic-by-my-side-lyrics.html

One line, one line is the same and it happens to be one of the most cliché and overused lines ever written down, so I suggest you stop accusing him of plagiarism/implying he plagiarised.
#6
Quote by phantom1
http://www.lyricsdir.com/the-automatic-by-my-side-lyrics.html

One line, one line is the same and it happens to be one of the most cliché and overused lines ever written down, so I suggest you stop accusing him of plagiarism/implying he plagiarised.

i was actually warning him that some narrow minded people may see it as plagarism. i said i believed it was accidental on his part..

so i have to say read my posts in future, and kindly request you fu ck off...
#7
Quote by Justaboy08
so i have to say read my posts in future, and kindly request you fu ck off...





Anyway, 'Thom Yorke' ( ), as far as the song goes I didn't think it was anything special. As soon as I saw the title, I knew what you were about to say. I guess this could probably work well in some metal-ish genre but commenting purely on the poetic aspect, I think there's a lot to improve.
I personally thought it's all so bland and just.. there. While this, of course, works extremely well with the theme of the song (I guess you can expect things in a war to be 'out there'), I think it doesn't do the writing justice. As far as I'm concerned, this needs more, maybe a good image, a well thought out metaphor, etc.
But! Like I said, if this is a song (and let's just assume it is) I think this would work well. The flow is good, so putting music to this shouldn't be a problem.

Hope that helped

If you can, please have a look at mine.
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=814869
Last edited by phantom1 at Mar 18, 2008,
#10
liked it it was very how to put it,for-warning its very true there will be a war over oil when we run out that will be WWIII and the Apocalypse.