#1
i worte this song about mother nature. give me some feed back.

“Mother”

we are killing her slowly
she been dying for years
we shoulda seen the signs
shoulda seen her tears

we neglected her pain
ooo how she’s been maimed
her wounds so deep
ooo how we weep

we are her children
she’s taken care of us
its time to return the favor
we need to help heal her
or else she will die

we need to save her
we are her saboteurs
so it is our duty
to make things right

now we’ve realized
what we have done
all I hope is
she’s not beyond our saving
#2
Looks pretty good.
You may want to think about the title. It's been done about a million times.
I like Fall Out Boy.
That is all.