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ok so tell me what you think, i thought it was okay, but i want to hear what you think.

Verse 1:

as I lay in my dying bed
with friends, and wolves embodiments,
surround me, gnawing at my feet
still reveling in their vague deceit

Chorus:

the end we made with them ,we fall
the empty noise, still hear their call
the hollow sound, envelops me,
ten second left then I am free.

Verse 2:

My last breaths, ticking like a clock
kept alive within these foul machines
for surely this the goal of man,
to live and die by his own hand.

Chorus

Bridge:

and deafening sound, and blinding light,
cant talk me down, from this tonight,
my loosened grip with one last gasp,
my voice begins to fill with rasp,
and......

Chorus:

the end we made with them ,we fall
the empty noise, still hear their call
the hollow sound, envelops me,
ten seconds left they fill with glee.

my style is a post-punk, hardcore sound, maybe some of or alot of the stuff screamed. tell me what you think.