#2
Some parts are picked a little too hard and some bits also seem a tadddd out of tune but most of its seems great maybe a little more intresting changes in drum beat might help

nice song tho
#3
I love the intro. It reminds me of something you' hear on The Wall. The chord progression is also very Floydian in parts, sometimes even a little Radiohead vibe, but the way it's presented with the drums and the strumming pattern makes it your own. More instruments would be cool. A soft, low-key organ would sound really nice, if you're using GarageBand and can throw in a fake one. The only problem is that the strumming is a little off between the two guitars, but as you said it's a rough take. I'll be interested to hear where you go with this.
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